Mack Hawthorne status

I got more done than I expected last night. It wasn't a huge update, but the guys are finally leaving town. The first draft of Mack Hawthorne is a bit over 7% done.

I realized that I need to sort out how I'm referring to people when I do the next draft. I tried to keep it consistent with who talking to whom and what the situation is. For example, Mack is a nickname that friends use. Hawthorne is what you'd expect another soldier to use.

Theodore is an officer in the army, but is also nobility. So he may be referred to as Lord Marston or Lieutenant Marston. It just depends on whether someone is in the army, if they are regular folk out of the army, or how formal the situation is. Theodore Marston is the one that is giving me the most trouble. So far only one person is close enough to him in relationship and rank to call him by his first name. How I referred to him definitely needs some attention.